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The murderer found.
Townies exhale with relief.
They pray it’s over.

It’s notable that
not everyone was there when
RB was murdered.

While the mob offered
their swift vengeful sacrifice
to anger's altar,

Roarbark had taken
one-hundred and three children
away from the scene.

"They don't need to see
anymore violence. Let them
play games and forget."

As the sun lowers
its weary head onto the
western horizon,

while kids are playing,
Roarbark closes his eyes to
forget today's stress.

Not realizing
after this moment he won't
open them again.

Kids are distracted.
They don't notice the towel
dripping chloroform.

Unconscious Roarbark
can't resist the piano
wire at his throat.

Silent and unseen,
RB's cronies have avenged
Their leader's demise.

Another dead...

( @Roarbark was killed by the mafia. 

The remaining players are: @blybrook PE @chart94 @DuranDuran @JayKay PE @MadamPirate PE @SaltySteve @squaretaper LIT AF PE @txjennah PE )

 
The murderer found.
Townies exhale with relief.
They pray it’s over.

It’s notable that
not everyone was there when
RB was murdered.

While the mob offered
their swift vengeful sacrifice
to anger's altar,

Roarbark had taken
one-hundred and three children
away from the scene.

"They don't need to see
anymore violence. Let them
play games and forget."

As the sun lowers
its weary head onto the
western horizon,

while kids are playing,
Roarbark closes his eyes to
forget today's stress.

Not realizing
after this moment he won't
open them again.

Kids are distracted.
They don't notice the towel
dripping chloroform.

Unconscious Roarbark
can't resist the piano
wire at his throat.

Silent and unseen,
RB's cronies have avenged
Their leader's demise.

Another dead...

( @Roarbark was killed by the mafia. 

The remaining players are: @blybrook PE @chart94 @DuranDuran @JayKay PE @MadamPirate PE @SaltySteve @squaretaper LIT AF PE @txjennah PE )
You mafia scum!  :redface: You'll pay for this!

 
Writers block is real. I feel like I phoned this one in. :)  (I bet @JayKay PE is feeling me)

My first draft turned dark. But then I couldn't figure out where to take it.
It’s always when I get dark that I’m like “shoot, I got to edit this. This is really bad and will make people sad”. As for writers block...not going to lie, I hate when I’m writing, got it all planned out and then- bam! Everyone changes their votes in a last ditch effort and then my whole plot changes! Thanks guys!!!

 
It’s always when I get dark that I’m like “shoot, I got to edit this. This is really bad and will make people sad”. As for writers block...not going to lie, I hate when I’m writing, got it all planned out and then- bam! Everyone changes their votes in a last ditch effort and then my whole plot changes! Thanks guys!!!
Yeah, I wrote this whole thing, then I re-read it and was like, "Wait, I just turned the whole town evil. No one will like that."

 
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